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Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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It is believed by some individuals that
music
 is a good method to gather
people
 from various
cultures
 and ages together. I strongly agree with
this
 statement as every type of
music
 could have its own
advocates
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also
 ethnic
music
 could attract
people
 to its culture. The
first
 reason is that fans of a specific type of
music
 or a particular band often form a community to share their ideas or satisfy the sense of belonging to a society. Thanks to social media, every musical trend could connect its listeners from a vast diversity of
cultures
 and ages.
For instance
, nowadays there are a lot of fan pages on Instagram or accessory shops related to recent musical trends all around the world that form a communication of advocates.
Secondly
, traditional
music
 often attracts
people
 to get to know about its origin and their
people
’s cultural habits. When
people
 get attracted to the
music
 of particular ethnicity that would lead to makes them curious about their ethnic habits and their
cultures
,
therefore
 it could make them more communicative and in touch with
people
 of other
cultures
.
For example
, in tribal
music
 festivals,
people
 usually tend to buy guide books or watch documentaries about the local culture to know more about them, which
as a result
 make the audiences more in touch with local
people
 and their ethnic habits. To conclude, I restate that
music
 can gather its listeners from a vast range of
cultures
 and ages together especially, via social media. It
also
 can make
people
 more communicative with
people
 from other ethnicities by listening to their traditional
music
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • harmony
  • integration
  • bridging gaps
  • foster
  • ignite
  • embrace
  • communicate
  • celebrate
  • appreciate
  • inclusivity
  • universal language
  • emotional resonance
  • shared experiences
  • intercultural dialogue
  • intergenerational connections
  • cultural exchange
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