You have recently booked a trip abroad with a travel agency; however, plans have changed, and you cannot go to that trip. Write a letter to your travel agent. - Give details of your trip. - Explain why you can’t go on this trip. Tell the agency what you want to do about the booking

Dear James Sir, Hope

evrerything

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everything

is going very well, I am writing

this

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letter

reagarding

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regarding

trip

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I booked with you

last

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month. The

trip

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I booked for next month,

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going to

Jamica

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Jamaica

for vacation from June 7th to June 15th .

This

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is all

inclusive

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trip

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with Resort Runaway Bay. The booking reference is 6789754. Unfortunately,

due to

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unforeseen circumstances am not able to go on

this

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trip

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. I have a family emergency my sister is

getting

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graduating

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Graduate same week, and we have

very

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strong bond with each other and am the only person

from

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family

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my family

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who lives in the same city and

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really want to be

the

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part of her special day. I really appreciate your understanding and assistance in

this

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case .I am interested in either

canceling

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cancelling

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the

trip

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entirely and receiving a refund in accordance with your company's cancellation policy, or rescheduling the

trip

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to a later date that aligns better with my availability. Please advise on the necessary steps to proceed with

this

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request and any associated fees or terms.if I can get

refund

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back that would be great and if you need any

futher

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further

information for me please feel free to contact me

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. I will be waiting for your positive response. Yours Sincerely, Shivani

shivanusharma09748Wed May 28 2025

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Check spelling mistakes, like 'evrerything' and 'reagarding'.

formatting

Make sure to start a new line for the greeting and closing. Use proper format.

structure

Try to break long sentences into shorter ones for better clarity.

clarity

Clearly state your request early on in the letter so it's easy to find.

effectiveness

The letter has a clear purpose and polite tone.

specificity

You provided specific details about your trip, which is good.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

213 words

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in their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. why is that? Do you think it is positive or negative development?

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