Some people say that environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Recently,In issues related to the
environment
is widely discussed among
people
all over the world.some
people
think changes in the
environment
can
distinct
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distinguish
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a lot of species and animals from the planet while others argue that we have a lot more critical environmental situations than these.as I see it,we face
also
some necessary environmental dilemmas.
People
are so wondering about Climate change these days and some of us are very concerned about species of
plants
and animals.
For Instance
, humans are losing so many vital
plants
and wild animals for a few decades because of changes in the
environment
.
For example
, Alulu known as the cabbage
plant
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This
was a Pakistani
plant
but
unfornatinely
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informatively
this
plant
is
extancted
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extracted
and there were a lot of other
plants
that they disappeared from the planet.
Furthermore
,one of the most crucial golden frogs in Panama are so is a risk of becoming extinct because of deforestation and lack of nutrition.
On the Other hand
,some
people
argue that global warming and
plastic
waste are important problems for the
environment
.In additions.
Plastic
wastes are very difficult to dissolve maybe it will take hundreds of years to dissolve.So it will affect the
environment
in various factors.
For example
,if
plastic
wastes are stuck inland or with ,
plants
it will cause a lack of oxygen
problem
.,
Secondly
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Global warming issue
also
is much discussion
problem
by the
people
. Global warming is no less a
problem
for the
environment
than others.
for instance
, In the Arctic ,region many bears are now dying because of melting the glacier. In Conclusion,
although
the death of golden fish and alulu
plant
extinction is a big
problem
while
plastic
waste and global warming are
also
a
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big issues for the
environment
.
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  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
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  • education
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