Some people say that environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Recently,In issues related to the
environment
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is widely discussed among
people
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all over the world.some
people
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think changes in the
environment
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can
distinct
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a lot of species and animals from the planet while others argue that we have a lot more critical environmental situations than these.as I see it,we face
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some necessary environmental dilemmas.
People
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are so wondering about Climate change these days and some of us are very concerned about species of
plants
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and animals.
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, humans are losing so many vital
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and wild animals for a few decades because of changes in the
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.
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, Alulu known as the cabbage
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This
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was a Pakistani
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but
unfornatinely
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informatively
this
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plant
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is
extancted
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extracted
and there were a lot of other
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that they disappeared from the planet.
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,one of the most crucial golden frogs in Panama are so is a risk of becoming extinct because of deforestation and lack of nutrition.
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,some
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argue that global warming and
plastic
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waste are important problems for the
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.In additions.
Plastic
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wastes are very difficult to dissolve maybe it will take hundreds of years to dissolve.So it will affect the
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in various factors.
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,if
plastic
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wastes are stuck inland or with ,
plants
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it will cause a lack of oxygen
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Global warming issue
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is much discussion
problem
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by the
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. Global warming is no less a
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for the
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than others.
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, In the Arctic ,region many bears are now dying because of melting the glacier. In Conclusion,
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the death of golden fish and alulu
plant
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extinction is a big
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while
plastic
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waste and global warming are
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big issues for the
environment
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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