Should the use of animals in circuses be banned?do you agree or disagree
Furthermore
, another factor should be considered is the health
reason, we know that the physical and mental health
of animals
cannot be guaranteed in the circuses
. As far as the journalists are concerned, the ultimate goal of circuses
is to get a profit. No matter how good a management policy the circus
has， people
are unable to meet the social and physical needs of wild animals
. While circuses
pledge that animals
are well cared for, the physical and mental health
of circus
animals
is inevitably suffering damage. (<<ADI>>, 2017). Animals
exist in a bad mental state because of being kept in a restricted environment. In the wild, macaques live in groups, it is reported that even with regular interactions with their trainers, circus
lions and macaques often show signs of severe boredom and frustration.(<<RSPCA>>, 2017). Training methods were reported and it was harmful to animals
. Circuses
reportedly use
cruel methods to train animals
, Jan maintains that animal protection international has repeatedly documented the suffering and abuse of animals
in circuses
. (Creamer,2019 & Phillips,2017). Undoubtedly, this
is a clear indication that the physical and mental health
of animals
cannot be guaranteed in circuses
.
On the other hand
, those who argued against that circuses
can be inspected at any time, and animals
can travel anywhere. This
can be seen that animals
will travel every two weeks, see different sights and eat different foods. When the circus
arrived at a new location, the animals
were given grass from different areas and food and water 24 hours a day.(RSPCA, 2017). They live a life
of luxury,go to lovely places to eat grass, and lots of good food. It was a really good life
for them, Jackson said.(2017) However
, this
argument is flawed. The home of wild animals
in nature from beginning to end. This
means that wildlife can only truly relax and be free in nature. PETA(2018) claims that animals
used in circuses
are often beaten by their trainers and spend much of their time trapped in small, sterile cages as they move from show to show. In daily life
, even with good housing, good treatment and good training, people
cannot solve the problem of animal needs. According to the report, "Wildlife life
in travelling circuses
... Doesn't seem to constitute a "good life
" or a "worthwhile life
". (Creamer, 2019). Therefore
, the government need to rescue animals
from the circus
and society needs to conserve wildlife.
In conclusion, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, I am strongly convinced that circuses
cannot use
animals
to make a profit, and this
activity should be banned. Because people
can neither guarantee the physical and mental health
of animals
nor allow them to use
their international rights well. The opinion in this
essay is only on behalf of people
who are in favour of the idea that the approval of circuses
cannot use
animals
. To address this
issue, the government and society should make a concerted effort to find solutions.Submitted by youhua94 on
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