These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What are reasons for it? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Over the past decades, the world has evolved enormously in doing daily activities. In the past, fathers tend to
work
at a place while mothers stay at home. Nowadays, Use synonyms
people
, regardless of their gender, need to Use synonyms
work
more time to survive Use synonyms
the
today's crucial world. More mothers go out to Correct article usage
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work
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in
these days while fathers take care of their children at home. I completely agree with Change preposition
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this
trend as a positive improvement, even though some Linking Words
people
might have different aspects. Use synonyms
This
essay will seek to examine the complex issue.
On the one hand, I would like to point out that there are various reasons Linking Words
of
getting Change preposition
for
the
gender equality, Correct article usage
apply
such
as more women have been seen in the working environment. Before all else, women are proving their ability to Linking Words
work
equally as a man. In every industry, we can see female employee ratios are Use synonyms
raising
substantially. Correct your spelling
rising
Moreover
, Linking Words
people
have been accepting the fact of no gender discrimination, and the financial status of families nowadays is declining due to the covid outbreak. Use synonyms
As a result
, all elder Linking Words
people
in the family need to gain a decent income.
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On the other hand
, I would like to express an equal view that there are several drawbacks Linking Words
of
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to
this
issue. Worst of all, due to the fact that companies are employing more and more Linking Words
female
, some jobs are becoming the preserve of Fix the agreement mistake
females
female
, Change the noun form
females
such
as nurses and doctors. Linking Words
Besides
, I would say most children are keen to be cared Linking Words
by
their mom Change preposition
for by
instead
of a father. Linking Words
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an
another negative aspect, Remove the article
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men
tend to do things briefly only, especially in the cases Add a missing verb
is men
that
they are not interested. Change preposition
in that
For instance
, most fathers do not know how to cook food for children and take care of their kids.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
there are some disadvantages and weaknesses, I passionately believe that there will have a good trend, in terms of financially and opportunely, if both Linking Words
parent
in a family can go out to Change to a plural noun
parents
work
.Use synonyms
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