Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that it is unhealthy for those
people
who are living in large metropolitans. In my opinion, I totally agree with
this
point of view because the pollution and the uncertain quality of foods in big cities may
cause
many severe health issues. Due to big urban have an advantage in transportation and infrastructure. Resulting in many companies settling their offices and factories there.
This
creates a lot of pollution in the atmosphere, water, and noise which absorbed by the resident for a long time may
cause
many health problems and diseases.
For example
, exposure to smoke exhausted from vehicles or industrial factories can
cause
lung diseases
such
as COPD (cord obstruction pulmonary disease) or even lung cancer.
Moreover
, a high concentration of the population in a large metropolis will lead to increasing demand for
food
and price. If the quality of control processes for the
food
supplying sources and price are not appropriately attended by the city authority,
this
will lead to
people
will buy unhealthy
food
with may result in medical issues.
For instance
, many types of
food
sold in the market contain various kinds of toxic substances. Consuming these foods will impact well-being and
cause
many severe diseases
such
as cardiovascular disease, cancers, or diabetes. In conclusion, living in big cities may impact
people
's health ,especially children and elderly
people
because of the population and uncertain
food
quality and sources. In my opinion, the government and city authorities should have policies to build and move
people
to satellite cities to eliminate these issues.
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