In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Overall in the world lot of
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struggle with their health because they consume too much unhealthy
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. The government seems to believe that maybe is good if increase the number of taxis for those unhealthy meals to protect its citizens from them. In my opinion, I, total agree with
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statement and I will try to explain in my essay why I think so.  On the one hand, fast
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brings society into a lot of difficult situations with their health ( fat, diabetes, heart disease, etc.). Society loses interest to cook healthy meals themselves. What I mean by that, is through fast
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consumption all the time
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get fat and become diabetes and heart problems. Because of
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situation that the
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are every wear and the
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are ,cheap they lose the interest to cooking they self a healthy meal.
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, my uncle is weight 200 kilos because he never cooks himself a healthy meal and always bought fast
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because they are cheap.
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, I ask him what is if the
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were expensive, and he answers he will not buy those anymore.
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why I, believe that through a big tax on the product our society will eventually be thinking to buy the product and it will be a motivation
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cooking .
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, through the big tax on fast-
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,
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the companies eventually begin to produce their
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with more healthy ingredients.
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, a finished hamburger used from a fast
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shop had a part of chemistry, tastes terrible and is created with a piece of unhealthy and cheaper ingredients.
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, advances in increasing the taxis for those unhealthy meals can use to bring companies to create more healthy
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. To conclude, I, believe that fast
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makes
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sick and fat but with a higher taxis in those ,
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people
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can stop buying those
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because they are too expensive and encourage companies to create healthy
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for their customers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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