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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Overall in the world lot of
people
 struggle with their health because they consume too much unhealthy
food
. The government seems to believe that maybe is good if increase the number of taxis for those unhealthy meals to protect its citizens from them. In my opinion, I, total agree with
this
 statement and I will try to explain in my essay why I think so.  On the one hand, fast
food
 brings society into a lot of difficult situations with their health ( fat, diabetes, heart disease, etc.). Society loses interest to cook healthy meals themselves. What I mean by that, is through fast
food
 consumption all the time
people
 get fat and become diabetes and heart problems. Because of
this
 situation that the
products
 are every wear and the
products
 are ,cheap they lose the interest to cooking they self a healthy meal.
For instance
, my uncle is weight 200 kilos because he never cooks himself a healthy meal and always bought fast
food
 because they are cheap.
However
, I ask him what is if the
products
 were expensive, and he answers he will not buy those anymore.
That is
 why I, believe that through a big tax on the product our society will eventually be thinking to buy the product and it will be a motivation
to begin
 cooking .
On the other hand
, through the big tax on fast-
food
,
products
 the companies eventually begin to produce their
products
 with more healthy ingredients.
For example
, a finished hamburger used from a fast
food
 shop had a part of chemistry, tastes terrible and is created with a piece of unhealthy and cheaper ingredients.
Thus
, advances in increasing the taxis for those unhealthy meals can use to bring companies to create more healthy
products
. To conclude, I, believe that fast
food
 makes
people
 sick and fat but with a higher taxis in those ,
products
people
 can stop buying those
products
 because they are too expensive and encourage companies to create healthy
products
 for their customers.
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