Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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in some

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, there is a surge in financial support from developed

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.

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, in my opinion, providing financial aid is not the only solution, since there are several other factors that may contribute to ameliorating these issues like

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and healthcare.

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strongly agree with

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aforementioned notion.

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with,

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plays a crucial role in increasing the financial condition of

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underdeveloped

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, providing better

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to these

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will not only increase their cognitive thinking ability

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but

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will lend to a stable job, thereby more income to their families,

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, financial income will solve the problem of overall

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in the country, since there will be more jobs.

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, the United States of America started free of cost high-quality

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for poor

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in Africa like Tanzania, Nambia and Chad. After a period of two years, it was found that people of these

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had more jobs in the international job market, at the same time overall

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index increased (Literate/Illiterate) .

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not only depicted these

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had better financial stability, but

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there were more research opportunities to undertake with the help of the revolutionised

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system.

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, money cannot solve the health problems because these

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are in shortage of the necessary knowledge to provide better medical aid to their civilians affected by deadly diseases.

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, people

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lack the necessary medical

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to provide the best possible remedies to the affected individuals.

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, even though an ample amount of money is provided, these

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still lack the necessary infrastructure like hospital wards or clinics to provide treatments.

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, ChanWui a small town in Chad

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was funded by the United States for providing more advance medical techniques like X-Ray scanning and different types of equipment used for various anatomies. These services not only solved the problem of health, but

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overall life expectancy increased by 20% because direct remedial services and equipment were provided rather than money. Due to

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it provided more workforce

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required to eradicate abject

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in some

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. To conclude, in the current world where financial stability does not exist across different

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, developed

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should provide necessary medical and educational aid which will eventually ameliorate the problem of

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for these

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