Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Undoubtedly, because of the increase in

poverty

in some

nations

, there is a surge in financial support from developed

nations

.

However

, in my opinion, providing financial aid is not the only solution, since there are several other factors that may contribute to ameliorating these issues like

education

and healthcare.

Hence

,

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strongly agree with

this

aforementioned notion.

To begin

with,

education

plays a crucial role in increasing the financial condition of

the

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underdeveloped

countries

.

In addition

, providing better

education

to these

nations

will not only increase their cognitive thinking ability

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but

also

will lend to a stable job, thereby more income to their families,

Moreover

, financial income will solve the problem of overall

poverty

in the country, since there will be more jobs.

For example

, the United States of America started free of cost high-quality

education

for poor

nations

in Africa like Tanzania, Nambia and Chad. After a period of two years, it was found that people of these

nations

had more jobs in the international job market, at the same time overall

education

index increased (Literate/Illiterate) .

This

not only depicted these

countries

had better financial stability, but

also

there were more research opportunities to undertake with the help of the revolutionised

education

system.

Secondly

, money cannot solve the health problems because these

nations

are in shortage of the necessary knowledge to provide better medical aid to their civilians affected by deadly diseases.

Moreover

, people

also

lack the necessary medical

education

to provide the best possible remedies to the affected individuals.

Furthermore

, even though an ample amount of money is provided, these

nations

still lack the necessary infrastructure like hospital wards or clinics to provide treatments.

For example

, ChanWui a small town in Chad

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was funded by the United States for providing more advance medical techniques like X-Ray scanning and different types of equipment used for various anatomies. These services not only solved the problem of health, but

also

overall life expectancy increased by 20% because direct remedial services and equipment were provided rather than money. Due to

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it provided more workforce

that is

required to eradicate abject

poverty

in some

countries

. To conclude, in the current world where financial stability does not exist across different

countries

, developed

nations

should provide necessary medical and educational aid which will eventually ameliorate the problem of

poverty

for these

nations