young people learn more a good behavior from books and films or movies than learn from real-life experiences. what text do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that young kids are more likely to acquire excellent conduct through
books
and films or movies. Others think that it is a good way to learn from real-life encounters. However
, the latter seems more in line with my standpoint based on the reason below.
To begin
with, young kids are able to take up good behaviour in real-life such
as in school. They would acquire a good quality from teachers and get some practice with their classmates. The most salient example of this
is in China where young children will learn the greeting rituals of different dynasties, and the communication of modern society and then
practice with classmates.
On the other hand
, one downside of teaching children via books
or watching movies is that it could cause a sedentary lifestyle and be detrimental to health. Children who become couch potatoes through spending too much time in front of the TV or a bunch of books
are prone to obesity which carries health risks such
as diabetes or heart disease. Another factor is that only studying in books
or films discourages real interaction, which is important because youngsters need to relate personally to others. This
is impossible if they are glued to a screen and books
which occupies all their attention.
To sum up, with the above negative of allowing kids to learn how to take good actions by watching movies and volumes. For these reasons, I firmly believe that the best way to learn manners is through courses in school and practice with friends.Submitted by aronwang1997 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite