In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
In other nations,
students
are given the opportunity to work or to fly before graduating high school or going to universities. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss the advantages Linking Words
such
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students
can earn money and will be able to gain advanced experiences that can be related to the course they are going to take in Use synonyms
college
. Use synonyms
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, there will be Linking Words
also
disadvantages, Linking Words
such
as, they can be overwhelmed by the salary and may end up not proceeding to Linking Words
college
. In connection with the previous statement, it can Use synonyms
also
delay their academic achievements.
The advantages of having a job or travelling prior to taking up Linking Words
college
are being able to earn money and coming across some adventures or events in life. Use synonyms
Students
who find temporary work before enrolling on Use synonyms
college
can somehow earn and save money which they can use for the Use synonyms
next
semester. Linking Words
Also
, whatever they are into may it job-related or travelling to places, they can obtain some learnings which they have not yet encountered. Linking Words
For instance
, a student who is going to take a hotel and restaurant management course can temporarily apply to a restaurant that offers undergraduate Linking Words
students
. With that, he/she will be able to gain advanced knowledge regarding hands-on training related to its course.
Regardless of these advantages, Use synonyms
students
can face Use synonyms
also
some disadvantages Linking Words
such
as, undergraduates can be stunned by the earnings they are getting which might confuse them about whether to continue schooling or not and Linking Words
this
can lead to delaying their bachelorette degree. It really feels different when you are reaping what you have sowed, Linking Words
that is
why working while being an undergraduate can lead some to stop studying and just continue working. Linking Words
Moreover
, having a year gap during high school and before entering Linking Words
college
can delay academic achievement, Use synonyms
hence
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this
hampers their dream job Linking Words
that is
in line with their courses. Linking Words
For example
, one can dream of being a nurse but since the call centre industry accepts high school graduates, one can be persuaded by the salary it offers which will Linking Words
therefore
delay achieving one’s academic achievement.
In conclusion, having the opportunity of working or travelling during a break from studies can offer some benefits, Linking Words
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however
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,however
also
have its downside for Linking Words
students
,especially in their academic achievements.Use synonyms
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