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some teachers says international student exchange program would be beneficial for all teenage school students. do you think its adVAntage will outweigh the disadvantage.

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'These days, as the number of
students
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 who study abroad has increased, some teaching professionals assert that
exchange
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programs
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 of
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 have some positive effects on adolescents in international schools. I support
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 idea because there are some long-term advantages in
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.
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,
students
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 who are in high
school
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 overseas gain useful skills by taking
exchange
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programs
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. It is commonly known that studying abroad gives
students
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 the opportunity to broaden their thoughts.
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,the Korean Times has reported that high
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students
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 who experienced international
programs
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 in other
countries
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 tend to broaden their thoughts much more and state their opinions obviously and clearly than
students
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 who receive domestic
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.
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 shows that there is the effectiveness of taking international
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programs
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.
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, it is clear that
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 it can be difficult for
students
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 to study
programs
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 including
education
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 in different
countries
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 at
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,
this
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 will lead to acquiring useful abilities in
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.
Secondly
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, learning an international
exchange
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education
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 is a pivotal role in
students
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'
life
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.
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 is because they can experience different cultures and understand people from different
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 well.
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, when teaching high
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students
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 about the only high
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 curriculum in their country, but after taking
exchange
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programs
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 from a different country, they successfully finish the
programs
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 and
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 they seem to be a well-understanding people.
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 shows that they are more likely to have good personalities and to continue these abilities into adulthood.
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, it is clear that taking
exchange
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programs
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 should be encouraged children to
life
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 lessons that far outweigh any disadvantages. In conclusion, it is undeniable that it is quite hard for
students
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 to learn the learning process of different
countries
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, it can provide young people in high
school
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 with diverse helpful abilities later in
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such
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 as broadening their thoughts and being a well-rounded human being.
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