Crime rates are increasing in the recent years in all countries and it is becoming more violent . Why do you think is? What can be done for it?

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contemporary world, criminal
activities
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social communities.
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detrimental
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way in the public lives and
also
it is becoming
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issue. I believe, there have important reasonable factors, why
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society. What is the main reason for crime-related actions and recommendations to obstacle these bad
activities
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To begin
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poverty is the major reason for violence. Particularly, people want to fulfil their needs and requirements in
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. Wherever poor people
who
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cannot afford to gain necessities, undoubtedly they have engaged
with
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these criminal tasks. Whenever they have enrolled with
such
actions, never fear to
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because they thought
this
is the only way to acquire their needs.
For example
, in 2000 an Indian survey shows that 60% of local people who came from poor family
background
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, mostly
commited
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these bad
activities
among
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community.
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, the public
have
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bad
impressions
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towards
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poor families.
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,
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responsible government authorities should want to implement rules and regulations to mitigate these issues. When local authorities have implemented laws
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welfare
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of the public and it definitely
assist
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to reduce these brutal problems in the community.
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, In 2010 Nigeria had 80% of
raoe
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cases, due to
this
the government implemented a law
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assisted to decline rape
case
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in
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.
As a result
, the majority of countries have made policies and schemes against these crimes and criminals. In conclusion, as a
citizen
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we want to become more and more responsible for our future
generation
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. If we
able
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to follow rules and regulations against violence bww can get
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community .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crime rates
  • violent crimes
  • economic disparities
  • social structures
  • urbanization
  • rehabilitation programs
  • law enforcement
  • values erosion
  • substance abuse
  • media influence
  • community-based programs
  • poverty
  • unemployment
  • public-private partnerships
  • organized crime
  • trafficking
  • cross-sector collaboration
  • preventative measures
  • statutory sentencing
  • juvenile delinquency
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