Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others think that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A section of society believes that

competition

can play an important part in the

lives

of

children

to teach them innovative skills and discipline whereas another section thinks that

co-operation

can assist them to be a good

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in future due to taking responsibility and controlling emotions.

This

essay will discuss the reasons behind these views along with my own opinion in the conclusion.

To begin

with, a number of

people

are in favour of

competition

among

children

because

this

approach can teach them to use their imagination to find out their own moves to perform better in it.

Hence

, they do work more with cent per cent of their capacity to get good results.

In addition

, when there is a sense of

competition

in

children

, they need to follow a pattern or schedule to sort out their moves and

this

activity certainly helps them to be disciplined in their

lives

. A survey conducted by the Guardian Newspaper in March

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2015 manifestly unveiled that 65% of

children

in the UK had found new innovative techniques and worked consistently on these when they were motivated towards competing

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other.

On the contrary

, it is being opined by an increasing number of

people

that co-

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operation

among

children

can be conducive to their upcoming

lives

as it teaches them to take the responsibility for actions and how to

priortize

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prioritize

their actions. In fact, when

children

are allowed to take part in team activities to learn

co-operation

, they

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understand the plans of the team and perform according to

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leader.

Moreover

, co-

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operative

skills can give

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chance to control the ups and downs in their behaviour. If

children

understand how to accept failure, they may become enough capable to bear the pressure of their upcoming professional

lives

.

For example

, a responsible and emotionally stable person can co-operate with other

people

in their hard times which is one of the basics of humanity. To conclude, even though some

people

are inclined towards

competition

skills, others support

co-operation

among

children

to make them good adults. I believe there is a need to introduce

co-operation

to

children

to build a better future;

however

,

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healthy

competition

can be a catalyst for

this

process.