It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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punishing negative behaviours should be applied. In Linking Words
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children
during the early stage can learn fast without any form of discipline, and physical punishment can lead to adverse effects.
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to, say infants can learn quickly with adults' guidance. By Linking Words
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, authoritarian Linking Words
parents
can be role models in a family if they want to nurture their Use synonyms
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to become law-abiding citizens. For Use synonyms
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reason, fathers and mothers should take the best of every opportunity as a lesson to show good deeds to their kids, Linking Words
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For example
, at the weekend, Linking Words
parents
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, getting in line, and being polite and quiet in a restaurant.
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In addition
, punishing acts might be potentially harmful to minors mentally and physically. By Linking Words
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may cause injuries or even fatal wounds. Linking Words
Consequently
, these dramatic incidents can hinder a child's cognitive processes. Linking Words
For instance
, in Vietnam, due to the widespread adoption of Western education, fewer Linking Words
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allows them to grow into independent and confident Linking Words
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can teach their kids by being role models and physical discipline can create irreversible damage to a child's growth.Use synonyms
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