Research into new types of medicine and treatments are essential to improve health and deal with diseases. Who do you think should fund these researches : private companies, individuals or the government ?

Medical

research

has become a debatable topic in recent years. Some

individuals

think that the

government

should be responsible for funding these projects, while others think private

companies

and

individuals

are responsible. Personally, I believe that the

government

should mainly invest in these fields with help from private

companies

to achieve more

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. On the one hand, some people claim that it is acceptable when

individuals

and private

companies

fund medical

research

as any medical

research

will help develop preventive plans and vaccines to prevent several diseases. Medical

research

by private

companies

will help the public find treatment and vaccination to demolish diseases and

this

would be essential for better

health

of the population.

However

, these researches would have property rights, intellectual and monopoly over the product during a given period.

As a

result

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their product would have a higher price and there will be limited access to the treatment or vaccines.

On the other hand

, I still believe that it is the

government

responsible for investing in

research

to improve public

health

.

Firstly

,

research

from the

government

will help citizens have equality in medical access. It is the

government

responsible

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to improve the country's

health

and prevent any disease.

Secondly

, there is global cooperation among countries to help improve

public’s

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health

.

For example

, Covid -19 has become a global pandemic, and

this

kind of cooperation will help to achieve the results faster while it could be impossible between

companies

or

individuals

. In conclusion, even though individual and private

companies

should help to invest in medical

research

, I believe that the investment from the

government

could help the citizens access quality

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medicine.