Research into new types of medicine and treatments are essential to improve health and deal with diseases. Who do you think should fund these researches : private companies, individuals or the government ?

Medical
research
has become a debatable topic in recent years. Some
individuals
think that the
government
should be responsible for funding these projects, while others think private
companies
and
individuals
are responsible. Personally, I believe that the
government
should mainly invest in these fields with help from private
companies
to achieve more
accomplishment
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. On the one hand, some people claim that it is acceptable when
individuals
and private
companies
fund medical
research
as any medical
research
will help develop preventive plans and vaccines to prevent several diseases. Medical
research
by private
companies
will help the public find treatment and vaccination to demolish diseases and
this
would be essential for better
health
of the population.
However
, these researches would have property rights, intellectual and monopoly over the product during a given period.
As a
result
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their product would have a higher price and there will be limited access to the treatment or vaccines.
On the other hand
, I still believe that it is the
government
responsible for investing in
research
to improve public
health
.
Firstly
,
research
from the
government
will help citizens have equality in medical access. It is the
government
responsible
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to improve the country's
health
and prevent any disease.
Secondly
, there is global cooperation among countries to help improve
public’s
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health
.
For example
, Covid -19 has become a global pandemic, and
this
kind of cooperation will help to achieve the results faster while it could be impossible between
companies
or
individuals
. In conclusion, even though individual and private
companies
should help to invest in medical
research
, I believe that the investment from the
government
could help the citizens access quality
in
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medicine.
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