Research into new types of medicine and treatments are essential to improve health and deal with diseases. Who do you think should fund these researches : private companies, individuals or the government ?

Medical

research

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has become a debatable topic in recent years. Some

individuals

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think that the

government

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should be responsible for funding these projects, while others think private

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and

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are responsible. Personally, I believe that the

government

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should mainly invest in these fields with help from private

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to achieve more

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. On the one hand, some people claim that it is acceptable when

individuals

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and private

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fund medical

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as any medical

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will help develop preventive plans and vaccines to prevent several diseases. Medical

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by private

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will help the public find treatment and vaccination to demolish diseases and

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would be essential for better

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of the population.

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, these researches would have property rights, intellectual and monopoly over the product during a given period.

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their product would have a higher price and there will be limited access to the treatment or vaccines.

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, I still believe that it is the

government

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responsible for investing in

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to improve public

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.

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,

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from the

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will help citizens have equality in medical access. It is the

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responsible

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to improve the country's

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and prevent any disease.

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, there is global cooperation among countries to help improve

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health

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.

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, Covid -19 has become a global pandemic, and

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kind of cooperation will help to achieve the results faster while it could be impossible between

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or

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. In conclusion, even though individual and private

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should help to invest in medical

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, I believe that the investment from the

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could help the citizens access quality

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medicine.