Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
to express my biggest concern with regards to the rubbish collection issue. In the past time, the workers of rubbish collection used to come and pick up the waste on time, we never had
such
issues earlier.I noticed that for the past two weeks they are not doing their duties on time. As
,
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All the waste in the colony supposes to be cleaned by 7.30am every day.But,it is being collected by 10am.
As a result
of ,
this
the rubbish smells very badly and the cows and the dogs are distributing the plastic bags all over the place.It is causing us more damage in terms of
the
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cleanliness and hygiene. Kindly, We suggest you address
this
issue at the earliest possible by considering its utmost important issue.
Moreover
,your waste collection team should find out the root cause of the problem and solve it.
Also
, the dustbins need to have regular cleaning deeper as they are more stinky.We request you not to keep us in the same situation again. Kind regards, Shobha Mallela
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