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Few people devote their time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effects this has on individual and society in general

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Few would dispute the need to pursue an activity or obsession outside of the task. the old English adage “all endeavour and no play makes Jack a dull boy”, is an illustration of how well-ingrained
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, despite the universal acknowledgement of the value of outside effort activities, as a society, we are failing to dedicate time to
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 pursuits. whether due to the pressure of work or a preference for more passive activities,
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 as watching tv, we are neglecting hobbies to the detriment of both the individual and the community. Often a corollary of failing to engage in the amusement is an associated negative impact on physical health. having an active
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 like sport or dance is vastly more beneficial to health than opting to watch tv or surf the internet.
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, hobbies
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 serve to promote mental health. a craft does not have to exercise the body to be of benefit to the individual. Being able to take the focus off work and channel frustrations and stress into a creative or absorbing occupation helps to let off steam and results in a much happier individual. the beneficial effect on the individual
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 has a knock-on effect at work, too. less stressed employees make for better colleagues and
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 an all-around improved working environment.
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, employees who pursue a
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 have been shown to be far more proactive in the workplace. employees actively engaged in a
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 are more likely to be better at creative problem-solving and helping out colleagues, according to a study by professor Eshelman of San Francisco State University.
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, pursuing a
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 may have unexpected benefits, particularly for the individual concerned. many an entrepreneur has made a career out of their
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. the dedication and absorption required to engage in a past time can often be successfully channelled into a business. there is no better guarantee for success than to enjoy the job you do. so taking up a
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 is a win-win situation for both the individual and for society as a whole.
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  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

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