Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, it is being said that there is a significant increase in the
options
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that humans have to choose from in different fields.
Although
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it is widely accepted that the variety of available
products
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in the market is far more compared to the past, I am convinced that
this
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does not
necessarly
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necessarily
means
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mean
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having the ability
of choosing
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to choose
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among them. The ones who advocate the idea of an increase in humans' choices have valid points. They usually take the example of well-known online shopping platforms like Amazon
that
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which
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provides thousands of a product that an individual searches for.
This
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clearly means that for a person to buy a thing, he can choose it among millions of different
brands
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with various
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colours
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and materials.
In addition
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, today's competitive era has resulted in companies updating their
products
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and offering new ones with better features.
Good
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example of it
are
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is
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Sumsung
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Samsung
and iPhone which are continuously introducing new gadgets with new abilities that even
has
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have
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made the decision for buyers hard to choose from. Apart from that, companies are competing with each other by providing
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a product
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product
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products
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with reasonable prices, which means a better ability
of
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to
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purchacing
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purchasing
things. Despite the above so-called, there are several reasons that limit humans'
options
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.
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of all, advertisements are playing an
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important role in what
people
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buy.
For instance
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, watching the advertisement of a special brand of
alcoholic
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an alcoholic
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beverage on TV and
then
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see
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seeing
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it on the street
billbords
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billboards
,
unconciousely
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unconsciously
convinces the buyers to choose it
although
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there might be other
options
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in
liqurestores
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liquor stores
.
Besides
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it, the reputed companies have made it difficult for
people
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to buy from other
brands
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. One can take the example of athletic
brands
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of
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apply
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Addidass
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Adidas
and Nike, which
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have
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taken the market under their
controls
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control
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and do not let other small businesses
to
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improve.
Thus
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, one can say that individuals'
options
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have been
limmited
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limited
to specific
brands
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albeit
the
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increase
of
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in
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their access to various
products
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. To sum up, there are considerable various
products
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in the market which
people
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have access to buy
although
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this
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rise has not contributed to
people
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choose
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choosing
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from them. I would say that the power of advertisements and existing well-known
brands
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has
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have
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pushed
people
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to buy only specific
products
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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