Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, it is being said that there is a significant increase in the
options
that humans have to choose from in different fields. Although
it is widely accepted that the variety of available products
in the market is far more compared to the past, I am convinced that this
does not necessarly
Correct your spelling
necessarily
means
having the ability Change the verb form
mean
of choosing
among them.
The ones who advocate the idea of an increase in humans' choices have valid points. They usually take the example of well-known online shopping platforms like Amazon Replace the preposition
to choose
that
provides thousands of a product that an individual searches for. Correct pronoun usage
which
This
clearly means that for a person to buy a thing, he can choose it among millions of different brands
with various colors
and materials. Change the spelling
colours
In addition
, today's competitive era has resulted in companies updating their products
and offering new ones with better features. Good
example of it Add an article
A good
are
Change the verb form
is
Sumsung
and iPhone which are continuously introducing new gadgets with new abilities that even Correct your spelling
Samsung
has
made the decision for buyers hard to choose from. Apart from that, companies are competing with each other by providing Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Add an article
a product
product
with reasonable prices, which means a better ability Fix the agreement mistake
products
of
Change preposition
to
purchacing
things.
Despite the above so-called, there are several reasons that limit humans' Correct your spelling
purchasing
options
. First
of all, advertisements are playing an increasing
important role in what Change the adjective
increasingly
people
buy. For instance
, watching the advertisement of a special brand of alcoholic
beverage on TV and Add an article
an alcoholic
then
see
it on the street Wrong verb form
seeing
billbords
, Correct your spelling
billboards
unconciousely
convinces the buyers to choose it Correct your spelling
unconsciously
although
there might be other options
in liqurestores
. Correct your spelling
liquor stores
Besides
it, the reputed companies have made it difficult for people
to buy from other brands
. One can take the example of athletic brands
of
Change preposition
apply
Addidass
and Nike, which Correct your spelling
Adidas
has
taken the market under their Correct subject-verb agreement
have
controls
and do not let other small businesses Fix the agreement mistake
control
to
improve. Fix the infinitive
apply
Thus
, one can say that individuals' options
have been limmited
to specific Correct your spelling
limited
brands
albeit the
increase Change preposition
with the
of
their access to various Change preposition
in
products
.
To sum up, there are considerable various products
in the market which people
have access to buy although
this
rise has not contributed to people
choose
from them. I would say that the power of advertisements and existing well-known Wrong verb form
choosing
brands
has
pushed Change the verb form
have
people
to buy only specific products
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