You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

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Dear Maninder, I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing

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letter to offer my apology for damaging your

wrist watch

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wristwatch

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, which I borrowed from you

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week. I am very ashamed

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irresponsible behaviour of mine. I borrowed the watch to wear at a marriage party and during that

function

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function,

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one of

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the cusions

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cusions

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cushions

pushed me. Because of,

sudden

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push I lost my balance and I fell down. Later, after getting up I realized that the display glass of the watch was smashed into pieces. In order to, repair the damage I showed it to a few watch technicians but everyone said that the damage

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irreparable.

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, I am willing to pay you for a new watch.

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, by doing so I will be able to

make-up

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for my mistake. I hope you will forgive me and I again apologise for

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careless act of mine.

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, I am looking forward to hearing from you as well. Best wishes, Jatinder.

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Coherence & Cohesion

Make sure each paragraph is strictly focused on a single idea to improve clarity.

Task Achievement

There are slight grammatical errors; consider reviewing sentence structure.

Task Achievement

The letter has a natural and friendly tone, suitable for writing to a friend.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter starts with a courteous greeting and has an appropriate closing.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

171 words

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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

Because of the covid epidemic, many people prefer to work or study from home instead of going to their workplace or university

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It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some experts think that universal basic income only makes sense if it provides just enough to survive on so that people still need to work and earn money for living. To what extent do you agree?

Some people say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?