You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

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Dear Maninder, I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing

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letter to offer my apology for damaging your

wrist watch

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wristwatch

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, which I borrowed from you

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week. I am very ashamed

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this

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irresponsible behaviour of mine. I borrowed the watch to wear at a marriage party and during that

function

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function,

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one of

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the cusions

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cusions

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cushions

pushed me. Because of,

sudden

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a sudden

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push I lost my balance and I fell down. Later, after getting up I realized that the display glass of the watch was smashed into pieces. In order to, repair the damage I showed it to a few watch technicians but everyone said that the damage

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irreparable.

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, I am willing to pay you for a new watch.

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, by doing so I will be able to

make-up

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make up

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for my mistake. I hope you will forgive me and I again apologise for

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careless act of mine.

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, I am looking forward to hearing from you as well. Best wishes, Jatinder.

mrsdnsFri Jan 17 2025

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Coherence & Cohesion

Make sure each paragraph is strictly focused on a single idea to improve clarity.

Task Achievement

There are slight grammatical errors; consider reviewing sentence structure.

Task Achievement

The letter has a natural and friendly tone, suitable for writing to a friend.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter starts with a courteous greeting and has an appropriate closing.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

171 words

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