You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

Dear Maninder, I hope

this

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing

this

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letter to offer my apology for damaging your

wrist watch

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wristwatch

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, which I borrowed from you

last

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week. I am very ashamed

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this

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irresponsible behaviour of mine. I borrowed the watch to wear at a marriage party and during that

function

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function,

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one of

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the cusions

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cusions

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cushions

pushed me. Because of,

sudden

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a sudden

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push I lost my balance and I fell down. Later, after getting up I realized that the display glass of the watch was smashed into pieces. In order to, repair the damage I showed it to a few watch technicians but everyone said that the damage

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was

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irreparable.

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, I am willing to pay you for a new watch.

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, by doing so I will be able to

make-up

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make up

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for my mistake. I hope you will forgive me and I again apologise for

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careless act of mine.

Lastly

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, I am looking forward to hearing from you as well. Best wishes, Jatinder.

mrsdns

Jan 17, 2025

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Coherence & Cohesion

Make sure each paragraph is strictly focused on a single idea to improve clarity.

Task Achievement

There are slight grammatical errors; consider reviewing sentence structure.

Task Achievement

The letter has a natural and friendly tone, suitable for writing to a friend.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter starts with a courteous greeting and has an appropriate closing.

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0
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

sorry
for
damaging
damage
item
borrowed
from
friend
I
am
writing
to
tell
what
happened
how
it
broke
will
fix
make
right
or
replace
pay
cost
money
plan
repair
return
meet
soon
thank
you
your
sincerely
yours
name
please
guide
understanding
case
could
let
me
also
contact
phone
email

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