Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Subway and Metropolitan are the biggest arts of
people
’s daily life. The more extended station, the more convenient for the transportation
of people
, so government should take part to solve this
problem
. I completely agree with this
statement and state my point of view in this
essay.
The first
reason is to reduce traffic jams. Nowadays, people
spend much more time on the road, especially, every morning before working and every evening after work. The cause of this
problem
is people
can not seek the station for public transportation
around their accommodation, so they have to drive their car. When many people
use their private automobiles, It is too hard for congress the traffic, making people
upset and negatively affecting their mentality. Hence
, the government should take responsibility for solving this
problem
to maintain the emotion of people
inside their country.
Moreover
, When people
use their cars too much. They tend to release pollution into the air and cause a higher temperature, which can cause a global warming issue. If the temperature increase, people
will open the air conditioner to reduce their sweat. The waste of electricity and fuel will be risen and waste a lot of funds to fetch others things for substitutes. This
occurs because people
need to use their vehicles. They will take public transportation
unless it makes them the more convenient way.
The conclusion is every ministry involved in transportation
problems should solve this
problem
, and extend the station of trains or subways. If the mental health of people
is positive, people
would have more creative minds to create the innovation for the country and reduce to exaggerate using of energy sources.Submitted by chachapanisara on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite