Last month you had an overseas holiday with a friend from your college. They have just sent you some holiday photos together. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos Explain why you didn't write earlier. invite them to come and stay with you

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Hi Dave, How's it going, mate? It's been like yesterday after I saw the photos that you sent to me. It was a precious moment that I got a chance to relieve away from the monotony of life. It was very generous of you that you could invite and allow me to stay over at your flat. I feel bad recently because I was lost in touch with you after that trip. Let me justify

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that, and don't get me wrong that I took advantage of you for the visit. I knew the incident of my sister's car accident after I had arrived back. I was dreadful about my sister and running between hospital and home.

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, she gets back in a good form now. I was wondering if you could visit back to me in

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holiday. I am always welcoming to show you all around my country. I would

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invite your parents too if they could spare some time to do it. I look forward to hearing positive replies from you. Best wishes, Tun Naung Win

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

180 words

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