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Today, in spite of the scientifically proven necessity of life-long learning, the idea that innate intelligence (thinking skills) is enough to have a successful life is dominating the minds of people. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays
people
 tend to believe that being born with intellectual
abilities
 will ensure a better future rather than gaining knowledge throughout life.
This
 essay will discuss the main problems associated with
this
 issue and propose some possible solutions to avoid them. The main problems caused by the loss of
self-learning
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the self-learning
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 process are
procrastinating
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procrastination
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 and lack of motivation and ambition. Procrastinating is a state when
person
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a person
the person
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 is slow or late about doing something that should be done. If
people
 only rely on their innate
abilities
 and do not do anything at all, they will lose their valuable time and many opportunities. In the future, they will grow up to be a person who is unable to do any work in a timely manner.
Moreover
, when
people
 do not study they lose motivation and become ambitionless, and in
future
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succes
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success
 will be preserved for them. There are several solutions like reading books and improving cognitive
abilities
 by solving quizzes and puzzles.
Studying
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The studying
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 process can be frustrating for many
people
.
Therefore
, reading interesting books,
watching
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and watching
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 animated educational videos can be good alternatives. There are other intellectual activities
such
 as solving puzzles, interesting quizzes,
playing
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and playing
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 chess, which not only
improve
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improves
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 brain activity
,
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apply
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 but
also
entertain
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entertains
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 a person. To sum up, relying only on innate
abilities
 can slow down the pace of
developing
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development
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 and possible solutions include boosting knowledge by reading books, solving quizzes and puzzles and playing intellectual games.
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