The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today’s era, the problem of housing is seeming to be rising especially in big cities. There are many

people

who go to big cities because of their family issues.

Also

, the large majority of

people

and a smaller number of

land

results in the problem of housing which will

further

have many consequences. It is said that

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the housing shortage, can be only solved by

government

action. I agree with

this

notion. In

this

essay, I will elaborate on the consequences and

also

discuss my viewpoint.

Firstly

, the

government

has the powers to control and maintain well all individuals.

Government

should give some extra facilities to big cities where there are a greater number of

people

. It’s the responsibility of the

government

to provide job opportunities to everyone. So, that

people

can enjoy their life and has a proper house to build with sufficient money.

Secondly

, the

government

should take the

land

taxes less, so that it becomes easy for a person to maintain their financial levels, which means, a person can buy the

land

and make their house as they want.

For instance

, I read in Tribune that 30% of

people

in Rattan are living below the poverty line and the village is considered to be very big, but there is a problem with the housing shortage.

People

do not have their homes which will impact their lives as well as their children. Those persons seem to be more mentally and physically ill.

Furthermore

, the

government

should construct

a new buildings

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for those

people

who cannot afford to buy

land

or make their big houses. Due to the larger number of

people

, which give rise to expensive

land

and that

land

is not affordable for the common man which leads to a shortage of houses. In conclusion, it is clear that

government

have a major responsibility to tackle

this

issue.

Government

should build new buildings and townhouses that can afford

people

at a genuine price. Through

this

people

can live stress-free.

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The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others,however,say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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