Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #technology

Nowadays,

technology

has become

the

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essential role all around the world. Some

people

agee

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agree

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that today's shopping is

simplier

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simpler

with modish

technolgy

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technology

, While others disagree.

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essay will illustrate both views, advantages and disadvantages. Presently,

Technology

is significant to everyone in different ways

such

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education which

help

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helps

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students learn more, transportation while

people

could know when the train or bus

are

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coming, and the

last

one lifestyle. It could be

delivery

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food and shopping.

People

tend to

shopping

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more because of

technology

which is easier. It can be seen that

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they don't have to go to the mall, It's uncomplicated.

For instance

, the COVID-19 pandemic has made shopping difficult with many in-person stores closed. With

technology

people

can now order products through the internet without leaving their homes.

Additionally

, there are export and import containers through countries,

which

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where

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people

can

shopping

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shop

be shopping

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from

foreign

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a foreign

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country

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countries

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and get what they require.

However

technology

has brought about the advent of online shopping, it has

also

brought about endless options which can lead to indecision and too much time wasted to find the right item to buy.

In addition

, shopping may be more difficult because when buying certain items online, it may be difficult to gauge the correct size of items.

For example

, online sales

does

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not allow for fitting before purchase when buying clothing or shoes. In conclusion, modern

technology

made shopping easier and

It's

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Its

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advantage

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an advantage

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for

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the individual

an individual

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individual

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individuals

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. I think that

technology

is the best option for

people

who do not want to leave their house.

Submitted by venus.mik2005 on Sat May 14 2022

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Topic Vocabulary:

online marketplaces
mobile payment options
personalized advertising
accessibility
compare prices
decision fatigue
impulse buying
financial imprudence
privacy and data security
transformed
streamlined
user-friendly

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