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A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir and Madam I am writing to you according to an article called 'The
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 that influenced you the
most'
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read a
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 when I was young and it really influenced me to be the person I am today and
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 why I would like to share
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 everyone. The
book
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 called 'The little prince' by a French author.
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book
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 was about a little prince from another planet who wanted to discover where was best for him to live.
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 he was finding over and over stars
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 he met so many people and learned from them. One of the most impressive things for me is when he said being an adult was not as fun as
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child which is really me. I have not realised that it was a precious
book
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 before but since I have been through so many positive and negative things. I found out that I cared so much about
other's
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 opinions
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 of following my heart. I would like to recommend everyone to read
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 again even if you have read
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 as the time is different and you would definitely realise something you have missed. Yours faithfully,
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