A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He/she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • Describe the public transport in your city • Say how your friend can meet new people there
Dear Sara,
How have you been? I miss the wonderful time we had together in the dormitory. I
got
very happy when I found out you are coming to our Verb problem
was
city
. It has a lot of interesting places and wonderful sightseeing. I bet you would fall in love with these locations. In my opinion, Takhti street
is the best place for accommodation. Capitalize word
Street
This
is located at
a lively and upbeat atmosphere. Change preposition
in
In addition
, various recreation facilities, such
as a pool, a tennis court, and a cinema have been offered by this
location.
Moreover
, our city
has access to an efficient and beneficial a
public transport system. Correct article usage
apply
This
system consists of buses, trams and taxis which covered
all Wrong verb form
cover
part
of the Fix the agreement mistake
parts
city
during the day. Unfortunately, the bus and the taxi aren’t available at night, so you should use tram
during the night. If you want to know about their fares and timetables precisely, you can ask Correct article usage
the tram
from
the staff Change preposition
apply
in
the stations.
Most people in our Change preposition
at
city
are very kind hearted
and have a sense of hospitality. You may not have any problem if you want to communicate with them. In order to Add a hyphen
kind-hearted
meeting
new people you can join Change the verb
meet
in
different social and Change preposition
apply
sport
clubs that Change the noun form
sports
are existed
in the Wrong verb form
exist
city
. It would be a blast!
I am looking forward to receiving a kindly
message from you.
Love,
MahshidReplace the word
kind
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task achievement
While the response is complete and well-structured, consider breaking down sentences for clarity. This can enhance readability and ensure that each point is easy to follow.
coherence cohesion
Be mindful of small grammatical errors and typos, such as 'a bus and the taxi aren’t available at night' and 'ask from the staff'. Improving these will raise your score.
task achievement
The letter covers all required points: suggesting an interesting part of the city, describing the public transport, and explaining how to meet new people. This demonstrates a clear understanding of the task.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is welcoming and friendly, which is appropriate for writing to a friend. This makes the letter engaging and personable.
coherence cohesion
The letter follows a logical structure with a clear opening, body, and closing. This makes it easy to read and understand.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph addresses a single idea, maintaining clarity and focus throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are well-crafted, adding a personal touch to the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,