Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists.To what extent do you agree or disagree

Science and technology

is

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a daily necessity.It is often argued that researchers and technical

experts

are more recognised by present-day society than

musicians

and

artists

.I partially disagree with

this

given statement and in

this

essay

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I will provide

further

details to support my argument. To commence with,

scientists

and technological

experts

play a crucial role in human lives by providing numerous innovations with

life-long

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solutions which are beneficial to the public.

For instance

in

yester years

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of

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2019 and 2020 when the covid-19 variant became rampant globally many

people

cracked their heads to find solutions to curb and control the pandemic.

In addition

, researchers spend sleepless nights and days manufacturing many vaccinations which have helped to minimise the spread of infection and prevent hospitalisation.

Furthermore

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with the aid of technological

experts

,

scientists

have managed to create awareness

to

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in

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community

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the community

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on the importance of vaccination.

As a result

of their sacrifices and

hardwork

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hard work

hardworking

scientists

and

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computers

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experts

deserve to be

honoured

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than

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artists

and

musicians

.

On the contrary

,

although

scientists

and computer geeks are more valued in the contemporary world

musicians

and

artists

also

play a role in humanity.

Musicians

and

artists

show case

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showcase

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their talent to the community

teaching

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by teaching

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people

through music about daily life problems.

For

example

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Jah prayer an international Zimbabwean jazz musician attracts a huge audience because of his fantastic musical talent.

Therefore

musicians

and

artists

have earned millions of dollars throughout their

career

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careers

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by entertaining

people

. In conclusion ,

scientist

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scientists

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and technology specialists are considered more appreciated

by

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for

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their ability , talent and knowledge when compared to

artists

.I completely agree that researchers and technology

experts

improve the livelihood of

people

and help save lives.