Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists.To what extent do you agree or disagree

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a daily necessity.It is often argued that researchers and technical

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are more recognised by present-day society than

musicians

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and

artists

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I will provide

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details to support my argument. To commence with,

scientists

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and technological

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play a crucial role in human lives by providing numerous innovations with

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solutions which are beneficial to the public.

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2019 and 2020 when the covid-19 variant became rampant globally many

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cracked their heads to find solutions to curb and control the pandemic.

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, researchers spend sleepless nights and days manufacturing many vaccinations which have helped to minimise the spread of infection and prevent hospitalisation.

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with the aid of technological

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,

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have managed to create awareness

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community

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on the importance of vaccination.

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of their sacrifices and

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and

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computers

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experts

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deserve to be

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artists

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and

musicians

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.

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,

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scientists

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and computer geeks are more valued in the contemporary world

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and

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play a role in humanity.

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and

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their talent to the community

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through music about daily life problems.

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Jah prayer an international Zimbabwean jazz musician attracts a huge audience because of his fantastic musical talent.

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and

artists

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have earned millions of dollars throughout their

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by entertaining

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. In conclusion ,

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scientists

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and technology specialists are considered more appreciated

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their ability , talent and knowledge when compared to

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.I completely agree that researchers and technology

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improve the livelihood of

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and help save lives.