Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since visual media plays a good role in educating the children, both educational institutions and the parents should encourage wards to watch television routinely at home and at school. I strongly agree with
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statement that learning through the visual method will be more effective and
this
method is good to adopt. To embark on, learning by understanding is very important. So, we have different ways like listening, reading, visualizing etc.
However
, a kid who is practising smart education can hear the classes and they can see the matter which is very effective and
kids
will understand the basics and he hardly forget whatever he captures.
For instance
, a student hearing his teacher teaching water purification in class
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will try to imagine the process while a pupil attending visual class can hear and see what is water purification and he could be able to understand much better than
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others
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.
Moreover
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he can remember the visual facts easily.
Therefore
audiovisual projected classes in the
ciriculum
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curriculum
will create smart students.
In addition
to
this
,
kids
who are watching television at home will get good information
regarding
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the world and eventually it helps to acquire some general knowledge.
By spending
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some time on stories, action songs, experiments,competition and all will progressively help the child to learn faster.
For example
, there
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a kindergarten online class called
fintoclass
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into class
who
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that
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is practising visual methods
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by
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trying to teach action songs to
kids
by playing a puppet
dancing
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and dancing
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according to the song,
meanwhile
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our little ones
gets
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excited on seeing
this
doll and try to dance along with that. For that parents
also
allow children to watch the media for an allocated time. To reconcile, the smart classes will create smart generations. As visual learning influences scholars in a better way , their faculties and guardians can arrange that for them. In
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I elaborated on how
kids
become smarter with the help of TV.
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  • passive
  • sedentary
  • limit
  • creativity
  • imagination
  • educational content
  • expose
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
  • negative effects
  • behavior
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