Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices
Naturally, when we are making decisions, we want to have choices.
However
, people
often claim that our options are more than enough. I completely agree with the opinion, the reasons are what we will be looking at in this
piece.
First
and foremost, revolution
of science and technology widen the source of information. In recent years, the use of mobile devices and the internet become more and more common in the world, Add an article
the revolution
a revolution
people
can obtain information by surfing internet
conveniently. Correct article usage
the internet
For instance
, in the past, ladies shopped around for purchasing new clothes, but they can find a satisfied dresses
on websites like Amazon and eBay. Correct the article-noun agreement
a satisfied dress
satisfied dresses
Nevertheless
, it is a trouble of showing thousands of products with different brands and styles when people
only want to buy one piece of clothes. It is hard and time consuming
to make a choice.
Another reason that makes us Add a hyphen
time-consuming
to
have more options is the increased level of educational literacy. Change the verb form
apply
People
do not select the things which are totally unknown. This
rise of
knowledge lead Change preposition
in
people
understand
Fix the infinitive
to understand
information
in more detail, Add an article
the information
in other words
, they have more choices. Although
we have numerous selections, lacking experience
to define what we need is Change the article
the experience
also
a great problem. Actually, normal vegetable
and meat can Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
fulfill
Change the spelling
fulfil
people
's need
, but Fix the agreement mistake
needs
people
prefer organic food after knowing the importance of nutrition. They look into the place of production, search
the list of ingredients. Sometimes, they are finding Correct word choice
and search
a
best choice Change the article
the
instead
of a suitable one.
To sum up, due to the breakthrough of technology and improvement of people
's educational level, I wholeheartedly deem that there are too many options available for us.Submitted by kuru on
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