Some people think the most important thing about being rich is helping other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Several individuals opine that those working in the entertainment industry are given high salaries. I,

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, fully disagree with

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thought and think that no job should be paid better

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other because everyone's goal is to live. The essay below will discuss

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and foremost, most celebrities are not well paid well, especially the ones coming from developing nations.

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, in Zimbabwe, there are several actors who have died in poor conditions without owning any home and not

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medical expenses. Even today, some even ask the public through online platforms to help them

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as they struggle to make a living. For

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reason, I disagree that entertainers are paid too much money.

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, a lot of entertainers have been diagnosed with depression and some even commit suicide because of low income from

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industry.

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, a recent study in South Africa showed that most stars are paid little wages not enough to sustain

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and their families.

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forces them to take loans from banks

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which they struggle to pay back. Most of the

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, some celebrities resort to killing themselves than

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live with

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embarrassment

and mockery from the media.

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is evidence enough that entertainment workers are not receiving enough salaries. In conclusion, judging from the examples given in the essay, I fully

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disagree

that entertainers

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and sports stars are paid too much money.

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, I opine that no job should be paid highly,

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, people must

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concentrate

on living than money. These and other issues are discussed in the above essay.