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These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #travel #countries #tourism #development
Traveling
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 to different countries have been grown recently and
have
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 become easier than before. I believe these changes have brought more
benefit
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 than
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a disadvantage
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disadvantage
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disadvantages
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 for both
travelers
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travellers
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 and the host country.
This
 development impact
on
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their economy and
culture
. By visiting various parts of the world people can know others'
culture
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cultures
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. If people travel easier they would communicate with foreigners,
learn
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and learn
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 about their
culture
, history, and diet which results in affecting positively
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their own lifestyle.
On the other hand
, some people may forget their own attitudes, rights, and their country's
culture
 completely. All cultures are respectful and
traveling
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 should slightly enhance the host
culture
.
Moreover
, improving
in
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the tourism industry can impact
on
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the economic situation. the more a country
has
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 tourists, the better they would have income.
Consequently
, citizens of that area can make
the
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use of
this
 development and have better living standards.
However
, provided that nations went on trips
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the
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abroad more frequently, they may lose their
interests
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interest
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 to visit the attractions of their own land.
As a result
, their states may be harmed and face
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financial problems.
Hence
, it is better to maintain a balance in going overseas, but other residents visit those places as well, so
this
 would not be a detrimental effect. In conclusion, the being effortless
traveling
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 to various countries in comparison with the past has some impacts. generally, the positive points
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 higher than
its
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 negative points
such
 as advantages brought to the
culture
 and the economy.
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