Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -describe where you lived when you were a student at the university -recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation -warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

Dear Sarah, I hope you are doing well and I want to congratulate you that you got an offer from ABC university. As for your question about accommodation, when I studied there I lived in the pink building behind the football court called DFT Apartment. They offered a free car park and wi-fi.
Moreover
, there are many activities that you can join with other students on Sundays.
Furthermore
, you can find some places which are close to the university by searching www.ttt.com. It is a free website that many students like to use.
However
, you need to be careful because there are many scammers who ask for a deposit before signing the contract. Many students have been facing
this
trick for so long and the university is trying its best to help. Keep me updated on where you decide to stay and you can ask me anything at any time. I am very happy to help. Wish you the best of luck.
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