Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant area of cities and towns .while other believe housing facilities should be built instead. Do agree or disagree?

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As all of

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are aware of global warming,

people

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are encouraged to mitigate the world temperature by planting

trees

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everywhere.

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, a few

people

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argue that

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should be planted either

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outskirts

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the outskirts

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of the

cities

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center

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rural

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in rural

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area

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. It

is disagreed

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that the idea of

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should have only

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free space. It should have in everywhere because of its huge benefit.

People

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in Asian countries know the value of the

trees

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specially

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in hot seasons. In

metropolis

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the metropolis

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area

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areas

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, most of the places are crowded with

condomenium

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condominium

condominiums

, apartments, hotels, hospitals and community

building

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buildings

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, so on. In order to get fresh

air

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and to have good ventilation, plants play the main role

for

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this

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environment. They provide shadows not only to human

being

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beings

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but only

animals

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to animals

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to make their accommodations. Due to the carbon emission from various

type

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types

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of vehicles

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downtown, the

air

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is polluted and it damages the

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people

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health. As

such

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apply

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planting

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along the main roads provide sufficient oxygen and

reduce

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the

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apply

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air

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pollution.

Moreover

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apply

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big cities have

seveal

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several

buildings but there should have a place

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small parks to do sports and exercise for all generations.

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the weekends, families can go a

pinic

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picnic

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and students can relax and hang out with their friends. In

this

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case, various kinds of small and big

trees

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are needed including planting

variety

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of beautiful flowers. To be green and to decorate a city , it needs some space to grow the

trees

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it may

reduces

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some parts of cities area,

owever

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however

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are essential in the environment and community have several benefits.

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, the government would relocate the necessary buildings

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out of the town or suitable locations. Alternatively, the downtown has less

air

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pollution and traffic jams and

people

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will get

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a more

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healthy and peaceful lifestyle. As mentioned above, plants and

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trees

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tress

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trees

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are involved in

crucial

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role in

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people

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daily life as well as it is protected the environment and global warming.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

335 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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