the growh of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. do you agree or disagree?

In today's modern world, there is a raging debate whether the traditional methods of shopping in towns and cities will one day give their places to the E-commercial websites? In

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of examples to demonstrate salient points followed by providing a reasoned conclusion. Personally,I strongly disagree with

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view. because I opine that,there are some attractive qualities in physical shopping that cannot be found in virtual shopping.

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, there is no amusing activity in shopping through your mobile but let’s

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a shopping mall with a playground on the

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story while there is a board-game Café on the

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shopping in a big mall takes a lot of energy

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it makes you hungry and tired

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classical shopping offers you the chance to use the recreational facilities in the mall.

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, your children will find it enjoyable and you can use your visits to shopping malls as an opportunity to spend quality time with family and friends.

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, real stores provide you

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convenient method for purchasing.

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,many tend to try the piece of clothes or shoes they want to buy and physical stores make it possible for them.

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online sellers provide an easy way to

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the requirements of shoppers I am of the opinion that, classic shops have more practical methods that will overcome all these obstacles. Maybe with some difficulties but it is not unimaginable. To summarize, I have to admit

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online markets will eventually dominate because of the ease and

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they bring, as I manifested above the existence of traditional shops will not eventually diminish under no circumstances.