After graduation many students take a year to travel. Some think that it would be more useful to work for a year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that students should start working as soon as they are graduated and should not waste time travelling.
This
essay agrees with the suggestion because of the benefits it brings to the students.
This
essay will
first
look at how working
experience
is important to build their future,
then
we will discuss how wasting time travelling affects a person's carrier growth. Education should not be limited to academics, a graduate should
also
have life
skills
such
as communication and teamwork. Work
experience
develops a student's personality, it teaches how to survive in a difficult situation and how to deal with different communities.
For example
, I had done many small jobs
such
as delivery boy, helper and office boy after my graduation to learn people
skills
which were lacking from me.
Furthermore
, when you have to be an outstanding person from a group of people, real-life
experience
is required. A graduate can travel and
experience
different cultures, life
skills
and languages. It will provide an opportunity to meet new communities and learn from them. For an instance, I had travelled across Europe from Portugal to London, in my travel I had done many small jobs to survive and pay for my travels because of
this
, I have gained a lot of
experience
that will help me to face many difficulties in the future. In conclusion, Working and travelling after graduation will provide a student, with much-needed
skills
that will help them to build their future. Parents should encourage their children to get real-life
experience
by travelling and meeting pupils.
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