Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter: - Invite him/ her to a public event in your country - Describe the public event - Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit. Do not include any addresses and write at least 150 words.

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Dear

Anold

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Arnold

, Am writing to invite you to the occasion that will be taking place in my home country Eswatini which I believe you will be pleased to attend.

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many things have been modernized in one way or the other, Eswatini has

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its

cultural

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and traditions

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the

umhlanga

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ceremony is done every year in

september

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September

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.The girls and young women are picked up from their various places of residence to

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Lobamba

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lobamba

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the lobamba

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area where they spend 5-6days preparing for the main day of reed dance.During their stay,girls are expected to cut the reeds for the repair of the

queen

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mother village.The whole ceremony is very unique as it brings unity to the nations and their dancing is very fascinating in a way that you can't stop gazing at them.

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,I have

also

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planned to go to Hlane game reserve for horse riding,

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sightseeing

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sight seeing

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and

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braai as we catch up.

Iam

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looking forward to having you over . Kind regards, Martha

marthandlovuThu May 26 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

164 words

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