Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Competition is an important deed for contemporary society, and some individuals

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that it is good for a child to be encouraged to compete, but

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opinion; It is better for children to be trained how to co-operate in leu of

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. Personally, I think that learning both of these skills

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vital for a child, and in the following, I am going to discuss my reasons comprehensively. Beyond the shadow of a doubt, all actions have their pros and cons, and competition is not an exemption from

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matter. Needless to say, we are living in a fiercely competitive world and we have to compete for everything be it a job, a partner, or a house, and

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sense of competition should be encouraged and learned in childhood. As it has been shown by the researchers, if a person does not learn how to compete during childhood, he/she would not be able to

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others

in adulthood.

On the other hand

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action may set the stage for jealousy

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in kids, and it can be deleterious if used in

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wrong manner.

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of co-operation solely can be a double-edged sword for kids. It has been proven that

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action learns children how to put up with

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, and the more the ability to compromise with peers

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, the less

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social tensions and stress in the future life will be.

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, seldom have people who

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been taught to be in accordance with

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the ability to resist and say no to undesirable demands in their forthcoming life. Because of the proofs which I presented in

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sentences, in my opinion, a person should learn both competing and co-operating during childhood in that he/she has the ability to use them in adulthood, because the modern world leaves no chance for shy and obedient individuals, and all must know how to meet their needs in a very competitive and ferocious contemporary society.

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, co-operating is

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incumbent for us as we live in a gregarious place and we must know how to interact and comprise with our colleges, friends,

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, strangers and etc. so we can live comfortably and reach our goals