A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, •describe what this book was about •explain how this book influenced you •say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you in reply to the request made for written articles about the book which has been the most influential for me.
To begin
with, the specific book which impacted me during my life is none other than “Engineering for Kids” by Mr David Miller. This
particular piece is targeted towards young children who have a knack for engineering and a thirst to understand how things work in general.
As such
, I would not be lying, if I said that this
particular piece of literature helped me to foster my fondness towards engineering so much so, that it paved the path for my future education at the point of time, resulting in my pursuit of a degree in engineering at my local university, and later becoming a lecturer at the same institution.
Furthermore
, I highly believe that there are plenty of children who have similar traits to what I had during my childhood and this
particular book would be an ideal stepping stone for their future endeavours.
Thus
, I hope my letter on this
particular subject will be sufficient for you, and expect it to be published in one of the future editions of the magazine.
Yours sincerely,
Rob Tucker.Submitted by kanishka.wimalasuriya on
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Task Response
To enhance your letter even further, consider including more detailed examples of how the book influenced your daily life or worldview, beyond your professional choices. This can provide a deeper insight into the book's impact.
Coherence & Cohesion
For even greater coherence, linking phrases could be used more strategically to connect your ideas more smoothly from one paragraph to another.
Tone & Structure
Your introduction and conclusion are both polite and appropriately formal, fitting the context of a letter to an editor perfectly.
Logical Structure
You have effectively structured your letter with clear paragraphs, each dedicated to a specific aspect of the prompt.
Task Achievement
You clearly described the book's content and its personal influence on you, which meets the task requirements well.
