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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel o or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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A few
people
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 believe that foreign languages should only be learned in order to travel or work in foreign countries whereas others say that there are other possible uses as well.
This
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 essay will cover both views and a conclusion
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.
To begin
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 with, it is mandatory for the
people
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 to be able to read, write, listen and speak in a foreign
country
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.
In addition
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, for applying to a position that demands to communicate with their local residents need to have a knowledge of their local
language
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.
For instance
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,
people
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 who travel to Germany for work-related purposes should have an understanding of the German
language
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 as the maximum population over there would speak in their local
language
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.
As a result
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, Learning a new
language
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 is always impressive for others, you could be one step ahead of those who don't know.
On the other hand
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,
people
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 tend to learn foreign languages in their
home
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country
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.
Furthermore
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, learning of new
language
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 in the
home
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country
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 could be useful in many ways,
such
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 as playing a vital role in the Embassy of that
country
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, taking tuition in that
language
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, working as a translator and many more.
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, my friend who learned French online is now working as a teacher in a school.
Hence
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, it is not important that you have to learn a foreign
language
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 in order to be called abroad, you can make use of that
language
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 in your
home
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country
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. In conclusion, I believe in order to travel abroad and work in foreign countries one should have a clear understanding of their local languages, but one can
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 learn and use them in their
home
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country
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 by taking coaching
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 or working as a translator.
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