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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter *Say where you think you left the papers *Explain why they are so important *Tell the manager what you want to him/her to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to request your assistance with the
papers
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 which I left at your hotel. The
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 that I left at your Inn are so vital to me. I think I
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 all of them in my room where I stayed. Exactly I put them on a shelf near the TV. Maybe the crucial
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 that I failed to remember top of the shelf. Can you look there for me? The reason is why I am requesting because some of the
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 belong to my company and some of them are essential to my family.
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However
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However,
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 there is one of them so important to my career.
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Furthermore
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 the counterparts who work in my company.
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 is because they desire some of the
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. I would be grateful if you could search for me and please send me. Maybe I would like to receive it as soon as possible but not later than a week before the flight. You can contact me on my mobile phone number which is: 507504009. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply. Yours sincerely, Ashurov Sardor

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Work on organizing your ideas more clearly by sticking to one main idea per paragraph.
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Expand on your explanation of why the papers are important with specific details.
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Ensure that your sentences are clearly structured to improve logical flow.
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Your greeting and closing are appropriate and polite, which is effective for formal letters.
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The tone of your letter is suitable and conveys politeness and respect.
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