Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past. Some people argue that this is because competition for jobs is greater that it used to be. Others say that people only continue their education because the opportunities exist for them to do so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays everyone has the dream of achieving better than anyone.In the modern era majority of people live in a mind of competition in the

field

of job or anything else. Someone believes that today's teenagers are well educated because of

this

running race or for getting a better chance in their carrier. I agreed with both notions,

this

essay will discuss the reasons for these views in the coming fourth paragraph. Most adolescents nowadays are more conscious of their professional

education

than in the past days.They all thinking about their better future at the time of school

level

. In past ,the rate of literate people are less, most of them diverted to something other jobs after their higher secondary

education

.But in

this

modern world, students are more practical and concise about their dream life.Because of that, youngsters must earn a high

level

of professional certification.

For example

, Today most companies

first

prefer the candidate for their

level

of

education

after that they checked the percentage of their knowledge.

Thus

,in the employment ,

field

it has more importance. Opportunities are getting through the

level

of

education

. In every

field

of ,work the type of positions is desired in the terms of graduation,

such

as promotions or going to other countries for

field

trips and so on. It depends on which what they achieved in their educational period.

For instance

, My friend's son got a managerial position at the time of joining .He didn't have any hands experience but his

level

of

education

gets that opportunity.At the same ,time others can't get it because of a low

level

of achievement. To Conclude, people argued both notions are correct points of view.I believe that

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better qualifications can have equal importance in the

field

of the work environment.

Moreover

, they can achieve better opportunities and chances to touch their dreams.