In the past, people ate local, in-season food, but now, people tend to consume out-of-season food from different parts of the world. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
In ancient times, communities had access to eat only
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homegrown
home grown
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homegrown
food
. Over the last
two decades, shipping between countries is gradually increased which has opened doors to import/export the
seasonal Correct article usage
apply
food
across the globe as a result
irrespective of any season people get an opportunity to non-seasonal foods. I believe that with such
trend
the positive outcomes outweigh the disadvantages.
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a trend
To begin
with, on demand
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on-demand
availbility
of out-of-season Correct your spelling
availability
food
contribute to address
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addressing
individuals
craving for Change noun form
individuals'
individual's
such
food
and helps to manage regular
diet across the year. Correct article usage
a regular
First
and foremost, some citizens go into a depression state when they do not get what they are craving. For instance
, while pregnancy, women have a powerfull
desire to eat a raw mango which is a summer fruit and not available around the year. Correct your spelling
powerful
In addition
to Add an article
the craving
a craving
craving
, some doctors suggest Fix the agreement mistake
cravings
to maintain
the same diet plan across the year which is not possible if they do not have access to non-seasonal Change the verb form
maintaining
food
. Thus
, It is crucial for policymakers to ensure all natural
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all-natural
food
is avaialble
for their citizens.
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available
On the other hand
, connectivity across the globe enabled food
supply chain between countries which provide employment for locals and contribute to Correct article usage
a food
increase
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increasing
countries
economy. To explain Change noun form
countries'
country's
further
, such
supply
chain has recruited many individuals to ensure Correct article usage
a supply
seamsless
end-end Correct your spelling
seamless
transportaion
of fresh Correct your spelling
transportation
food
. For example
, As per the recent survey conducted by Correct your spelling
Malaysia
Malaysian
Malysia
government, ten Correct article usage
the Malysia
percent
of their population are directly or indirectly working on Change the spelling
per cent
global
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the global
food
supply chain. In addition
to employment, the governments impose the
import and export taxes that result in additional revenue to the public fund which can be Correct article usage
apply
utlized
for the betterment of their nation. Correct your spelling
utilized
utilised
For example
, The
90 Correct article usage
apply
percent
of the Change the spelling
per cent
Singapore
economy is generated by imports and exports.
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Singapore's
Finally
, to recapitulate, availability
of non-seasonal Correct article usage
the availability
food
is good for societies as they not only fulfill
the desires but Change the spelling
fulfil
also
to coutries
to economy and employment.Correct your spelling
countries
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...