Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

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Hi Keerthi, Hope you're doing well. I'm extremely glad to know that you've decided to learn to drive. As I attended the driving classes and learned it a couple of years ago, I would like to enumerate a few points regarding the same. I've personally benefited a lot from self-driving, it's really pretty useful to visit places where ever we want independently. It has gained me a lot of confidence to handle any issues in public on my own because of travelling individually to various localities.

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be used as a mandatory Identity card in a few documentation procedures. I would strongly recommend you to join 'Modern driving school', located near the Sathyam theatre. The staffs here are friendly and hospitable, we could pursue the classes with great comfort as the timings are

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flexible. Once you start attending the classes, you should observe all the minute details while the trainer is performing. Apart from

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always carry your documents wherever you travel and

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drive slow by following the traffic rules strictly. All the best. With love, Sri

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

182 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Driving licence
Public transportation
Independence
Daily commutes
Emergency transportation
Self-reliance
Structured learning environment
Professional driving instructors
Advanced driving techniques
Safety awareness
Flexible timings
Weather conditions
Basic vehicle maintenance
Traffic signs
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