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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is often believed that the present generation is living in the best of
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 in world history. While I reckon
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 opinion is certainly true as today our
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 are more convenient than any other time in the past, to get to live in the early 1900s would be an interesting choice as one could see the simplicity
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 had in those years. The primary reason most consider modern
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 to be the best is because of the convenience we get to enjoy in our everyday
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. Latest
technology
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 and modern innovations have made a significant impact in every area of our
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 and have made it super comfortable compared to the past generations.
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, we can now shop online with a single click, connect with our loved ones on a video call, get advanced healthcare facilities, fly to faraway locations easily etc, these are some ways how
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 has completely changed our
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 for good. In fact, our
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 are now so dependent on modern gadgets
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 as mobiles, computers etc. that we cannot even think of surviving a single day without them. For these reasons, many consider that we are living in the golden
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 of human history. Having said that, it would still be exciting to see how people used to live before
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 brought
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 an enormous change in our
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. Going back to the early 1900s when crucial inventions
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 as planes, automobiles etc. were still in nascent stages, it would be great to observe the differences in the lifestyle of people of that time when most of the world had a simpler
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. We can hardly imagine the dreams and aspirations of people from that era.
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, individuals from our grandfather’s generation are generally considered more fit- physically and mentally, as they used to work for a shorter duration and had ample amount of time for their leisure activities.
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, I believe living in those
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 can be an interesting way to taste different flavours of human
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. To conclude, modern
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 are the best years of human history due to the massive change
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 has brought to our
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 and made them more convenient. Still, to live a simpler
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 before modern gadgets took over everything can be a good idea to enjoy a different variety of human
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.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unprecedented
  • prosperity
  • technological advancements
  • global connectivity
  • longevity
  • opportunities
  • self-expression
  • renaissance
  • exploration
  • industrial revolution
  • roaring twenties
  • unparalleled
  • groundbreaking
  • transformative
  • revolutionary
  • epoch-making
  • flourished
  • transcended
  • innovations
  • distinguished
  • renaissance artists
  • explorers
  • innovative entrepreneurs
  • exhilarating
  • era
  • unforgettable
  • boom
  • vibrant
  • exuberant
  • transformed
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