Many people today put personal information online for the needs of daily lives (e.g., shopping, banking, and social network). Is it a positive or negative development?
Humankind is
incredibily
dependent on the internet for numerous things. Correct your spelling
incredibly
People
seldom key in their personal data on the
online websites for their convenience. Usually, when Correct article usage
apply
one
puts their information for the first
time, there is a pop up to save credit card details
or when on a social media site, one
tends to save the birthdate or a cell number, which is over and above the purpose. From my perspective, we should not brazenly make our details
available, I will further
support my arguments in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there is a rampant increase in the number of hackers disrupting our privacy. In other words
, by phishing, hackers are withdrawing cash, transferring
money. Correct word choice
and transferring
For instance
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the cyber
cyber
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cybercriminal
criminal
may deceive Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
people
by use
of malicious software and empty their bank balance. Correct article usage
the use
Although
saving credit card details
on the mobile makes the transaction faster, the big picture look of falling prey to wrongdoings by hackers feels scary.Futhermore
, if Correct your spelling
Furthermore
people
have same
pins or Correct article usage
the same
password
for various bank accounts Fix the agreement mistake
passwords
then
it will be a Correct your spelling
cakewalk
cake walk
for carrying out illegal activities. Apart from that, Correct your spelling
cakewalk
one
may clone social media account like twitter
or Change the capitalization
Twitter
linkedin
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LinkedIn
Linkedin
propogate
fallacious messages, and Correct your spelling
propagate
one
may get under radar
if Add an article
the radar
text
is pertaining to politics or Add an article
the text
countries
economy.
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countries'
country's
On the other hand
, when one
overwhlem
online sites with Correct your spelling
overwhelm
overwhelms
execessive
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excessive
details
,one
will have ghost
following. To elaborate on Add an article
a ghost
this
, one
may stalk a person on sites like facebook
and know their whereabouts and eventually follow you advertently to commit some hideous crimes, Change the capitalization
Facebook
such
as stealing or kidnapping or even rape. Besides
this
, one
will be an open book to the world if they exhibit their social life on instagram
, and Change the capitalization
Instagram
in person
when Add a hyphen
in-person
people
meet each other they may not have any conversation topics as they already know everthing
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everything
Consequently
, virtual
world would be more intriguing rather than the actual life.
To summarise, as Correct article usage
the virtual
cyber crime
is Correct your spelling
cybercrime
widespreading
resulting in various frauds, Correct your spelling
widespread
one
should avoid disclosing information to various sites to minimise any mischap
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mishap
mishaps
moreover
by
conversing and Change preposition
apply
unraveling
stories with friends is more enthralling compared to putting everything online.Change the spelling
unravelling
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