After graduation, many students take a year to travel. Some think that it would be more useful to work for a year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is very common for privileged students from developed nations to take a

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to travel between the end of high school and the beginning of

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in lieu of working part-time. In my opinion, it is much better to develop your capacity for

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activity rather than getting a job in

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interim period. The main reason many advocate employment during a gap

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is the cultivation of a strong work ethic. When someone begins working, their bad habits necessarily subside.

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, a worker has to be on time, work diligently, follow orders, get along with co-workers, show initiative, have a positive attitude, endure long days, and make ends meet with little pay.

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is the moulding process of adulthood which entails reconciling your personal desires with the expectations of the community at large. The individual who opts to spend their gap

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working

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more well-rounded, disciplined, and humble.

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, a strong work ethic is bound to develop later while the ability to enjoy one’s

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while travelling is a far more valuable skill. Most people acclimate to working with a part-time job during high school or in

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. At worst, they develop these qualities after graduation. Since they have been either working or studying their entire lives they have neglected the ability to enjoy the

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that distinguishes higher classes. The average person who has been working their entire life goes on holiday or retires and feels restless. To enjoy your

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time travelling you must be able to set aside future worries, live in the moment, get outside your comfort zone, have a wide range of hobbies and skills, and be active for a full day without a workday. Chances to cultivate these habits will see far less light with a career and family so it is best to nourish them before

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. In conclusion, the gap

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is a crucial space for individuals to develop personal relationships in their

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time.

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is important as an ever-advancing career can become an undesirable transformational experience.