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Internet technology means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Internet
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 and advancements in technology have changed the way how a person imagines a certain
place
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 and a
country
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.
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, some claims that in order to learn about the living habits of a
country
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one
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 just read the info on the computer and see the pictures of that
country
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.
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, I partially agree with
this
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 notion.
This
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 is true that the
internet
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 has removed the bars between countries and their people.Anyone can grab the knowledge about any site in the world ,
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, living habits, culture, food and geographical diversity. To illustrate, I am an immigrant in
Canada
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,
therefore
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 before moving to
Canada
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 to collect all the information about the
place
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 where I was going to live, packed clothes according to the weather conditions of
Canada
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.
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, the
internet
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also
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 gave data about the people of different nationalities who
also
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 live in
Canada
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.
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, by reading all the information,
one
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 can take a picture and imagination about that
place
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.
On the other hand
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, there is a big difference between imagination and reality. It is true
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 can think of that area by looking at pictures of different tourist places on the
internet
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. But the reality is always different from that what we look in the pictures.
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, since I belong to India, India is a tropical
country
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 with normal weather conditions.
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 to
Canada
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 which is near the north pole of the earth and has extreme climate conditions.
Although
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 I had knowledge about
this
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 weather kind of climate in
Canada
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 before moving to
Canada
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, the feel of the climate is entirely different.
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,
one
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 can get the experience of a
place
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 only by visiting it. In conclusion, there is no doubt that we can learn about many countries and places through the
internet
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 but the real picture of that
place
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 can only be felt by visiting it.
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