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The prison system has not been effective at reforming criminals. A large number of convicted felons return to committing crimes soon after being released. What are the problems with the prison system and what solution can you recommend to address this issue?

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Over the
last
 few ,decades the crime rate has gradually increased across the globe.Even though there are various
prison
 systems which are being used to reform the
criminals
 but
this
 was not implemented strictly.Due to these ineffective
prison
 reforms,activities the
criminals
 are again committing some serious crimes . I will be discussing the problems in brief.
Firstly
, there are no proper laws to be imposed on
criminals
 as part of their punishment. One of the reasons could be officials are failed to control and act strictly on the
criminals
.
In addition
 to
this
 criminal who has more power and money are able to receive special treatment from jail officers. To add to
this
 there is no proper system which tracks the progress of reforming the activity of individual
criminals
. I believe the solution to
this
 problem is to cleanse the entire law and sections of the
prison
 system. The government should bring
such
 new laws that even a criminal could not think of committing any new crime. All the access to the outside world could be cut completely. The government should conduct some personality development classes and make them understand the serious consequences of their crime. To conclude, the only best and possible way to reform
criminals
 is to make them realize their mistakes . ,
Also
 the
criminals
 should understand how to make their life better again by doing the good things. Along with
this
 government should implement strict rules on the
prison
 systems and track their progress frequently,
Finally
Add a comma
,Finally
show examples
 the
prison
 system should bring new hope into
criminals
' life.
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