today more and more tourist are visiting places were conditions are difficult,such as sahara desert and antartica.what are the benifit and disadvantage for tourist who visit such places.
Nowadays,
Tourists
are finding to visit
weird places
conditions in the world even if it is very difficult such
as the Mongolia desert or the Amazon forest. In Thailand, I have seen a tour program that will service tourists
in this
extraordinary place overseas. In the following paragraph, I will explain the benefits and drawbacks to visit
these places
.
On the one hand, Most odd places
are related to nature tourism. The benefits will make ecotourism in natural resources and make local community have revenue. For example
, In Thailand has ecotourism in some northern provinces. Tourists
stay in homestay and do activities with local people
such
as Trekking to find organic food materials. After that, Coming back to local villages and cooked with the homestay family. It is a new ecotourism place that has a suitable number of tourists
.
On the other hand
, Tourists
will damage the environment of local lifestyles. For example
, Some local people
be scared when strangers live in the villages. Add a verb
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The
tourists
will damage the local environment such
as the rubbish problem. Moreover
, In tourist attitude, Some place is dangerous for tourism such
as Afghanistan were ruled by the Taliban but I have seen a tour sponsor invite brave tourist to visit
Afghanistan. That I think female peoples are not brave to visit
Afghanistan because the law is not fair to female people
.
In conclusion, Visiting places
where conditions are difficult depends on the adventures of people
that have a different mindset. However
, It not only has benefits but also
has drawbacks as I illustrate in the essay.Submitted by first.kantapat on
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