Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

In
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contemporary era, people are trying to invent new things which assist them to
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make easier in their lifetime.
Moreover
, whole around the world human beings are
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from effects of the environmental pollution. Wherever
plastic
bags and other
plastic
materials are used by citizens
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increasing level of usage. Some argued it ensured the detrimental outcomes for
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nature.
This
essay will focus on the issues from these plastics and how could we prevent
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?
To begin
with, significantly,
plastic
is a durable product
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wherever communities are willing to buy these for their purposes. Certainly, communities are not able to
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it in
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accurate way and it paves the way to land pollution.
For example
, an Indian survey shows that the sea turtle had died because the researchers revealed that these animals had eaten
plastic
materials
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the
sea water
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. As a result,
currently
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also
living creatures died out because not these plastics which they eat
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a food
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.
Furthermore
, as a solution, the governments have attempted to implement rules and regulations to tackle
this
common issue. Wherever they are able to organize awareness programmes
similarly
, they have introduced eco-friendly bags,
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for the society to prevent
plastic
usage in their daily life.
For instance
, in China, the local authorities had implemented
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low
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which assisted to overcome
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high
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of
plastic
products
among
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the society.
Consequently
, the community have awarded about it and tried to mitigate that kind of
products
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. In conclusion, in my opinion, if we have
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about our surrounding nature, defined we will be able to tackle the
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rates of
plastic
usage in our routines.
Thus
, I believe a government want to construct
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procedures for
plastic
and it will
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to
decline
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pollution
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issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • ecosystems
  • wildlife
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • air pollution
  • strict regulations
  • plastic consumption
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • sustainable packaging
  • recycling facilities
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